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Final Sunset

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UNFORGIVEN

Silken shrouds enfold
The living, yet ghastly, form;
Humanity’s guilt ~
A finger points directly
At you, accused, condemned, blind.

Inge Meldgaard 2010

This poem is in the form of a Japanese 'tanka'.
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chalengerx's avatar
I must say that, although the form is correct, in tradition it should be about nature. Just like Haiku.